anti-prose. random matter.
Published on December 30, 2005 By crimson In Blogging
old people scare me...


I think really old ladies' skin will tear away with the slightest pressure, and I suck in my breath every time I see the old man from the retirement complex attempt to board the bus. Unlike children who are just learning how to walk, they have a resiliency that old people simply don't possess. A wipeout for them is just par for the course. But if Mr. Mathers was to take one wrong step, I'm positive that the wail of an ambulance would be forthcoming.

On a day like today, the waiting list at Civic must be filled with the names of those born more than sixty years ago. Just this morning, I saw a woman with a sensible coat, wearing sensible gloves and a sensible hat do a very unsensible thing.

She stepped out onto the sidewalk, and dared the devil to do his worst.

It was sheer ice. Any fool could see that. She did it, though. In her brown leather boots, she placed one foot in front of the other and tempted fate with each step. Maybe she was off to mail a letter, or perhaps she had to go to the store for an important ingredient for the evening meal. Either way, she did it with a particular expression on her face.

I've seen that expression before.

It's that staunchly determined expression that simply fixates on what it's going to feel like when the job is done. For better or for worse, it was going to happen because it was her decision, not any one else's. If she was going to break her hip, then so be it. But, she wasn't going to mind any well-intentioned advice. She was going to do what she damned well pleased. She was an adult, not a child, and would not be treated like one.

I never got a chance to see if she made it back home safely, and I didn't see any ambulances go by that direction.

But I did think of her more than a few times throughout the day.

I wonder if she's gloating now.

Comments
on Dec 30, 2005
Nice writing! I'm glad I added you to my favorite's list.
on Dec 30, 2005
Nothing really to add, but that was a great read Nicky.
on Dec 31, 2005
I could really picture this Nic, and living in the N.W. I see similar things. Hell, when I see straight ice I freak out.

Nice writing! I'm glad I added you to my favorite's list.


I knew you had good taste!

Happy New year to you all!
on Dec 31, 2005
As I get older I pay attention more to the even older people around me.

Sometimes I think death is preferred to the way you have to live as your body gives up the battle. It sometimes joyfully takes its revenge for all the years you kept it up all night partying and dancing, and whatever. What you perhaps once showed off for being firm and resilient, now can't even be bothered to get you safely to the mailbox.

Bah.

I hope she made it, if just to prove to her body whose boss!

Great story!

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on Jan 01, 2006
Thanks to everyone.... and Shovelheat... thanks, coming from you, that's right on. You're the best of the best, for sure.
on Jan 01, 2006
Loved it Nicky!

(and thanks for the card).
on Jan 01, 2006
A very well written slice of life. Shes sounds like a determined woman.
on Jan 01, 2006
Well written and interesting. I could picture her easily.
on Jan 02, 2006
Working in a hospital, I feel the same way you do about the elderly. Their fragility is so visible sometimes, I wonder how their legs can even hold them up. Of course, the other thing I think about is getting old myself. Of course, there is nothing I can do about except try and enjoy my life as much as I can while I'm still able to get around.

I really enjoyed reading this. Well done.